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The plot of this story is one of a kind. However, the author should do justice to this book by working on the grammar of the book. I love the storyline already but the writing quality makes me want to think twice. The author should fix this.
Uhm, the grammar in this chapter is a bit off, present and past tenses aren't used rightly. And also, the guy's name is Christabel? Isn't that a female name? The name Christabel is primarily a female name of Spanish origin that means beautiful Christ follower. Plus, the setting is a bit rushed and I turned confused. The author jumped right into the scene without explaining the setting. I don't know if this chapter occurred in a forest or in a market place, it's confusing, author should fix this. I think I'll drop the book from here.
Great! This is wonderful and the first chapter is thrilling. The author is doing a great job and I highly recommend this book. However, there's so much editing that's needed for the synopsis, the author needs to look into that. And the title, I don't know if the author doesn't know but the capitalization of the title is right. But then, this book is filled with so much great potential. Kudos to the author.👍👍
Honestly, I only had to read the first chapter to conclude that am turned off. So much editing needs to be carried out in this book. The author isn't using the words rightly. This is a Chinese book and the FL is answering Lousi Chen and her parents go by the name Zhao, how can she be a Chen when her parents bear Zhao? It's boring and the reaction of the FL is not intriguing at all. It gives no vibe of a typical Chinese book. Author should work on this work all over.