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Man!! What a disappointing chapter. This story was good for 49 chapters, but the last 2 chapters were stupid. Also, the last chapter made it seem like hundreds of jounin had accused him. Now, there were only 2.... Seriously, Hiruzen is "powerless" and has to hold a trial against a Kage level ninja for 2 jounin??? The most disappointing is the MC.... 70℅ template should not only be strength and jutsus, it should also be politics, diplomacy, how to speak and charm, etc. If Tsunade hadn't shown up, would the MC have remained quiet and accepted everything....
This story was going so good. But then this chapter seemed so stupid. 1. MC is a war hero, and Kage level ninja. They should be trying to win his loyalty, instead of antagonising him. 2. Hiruzen being powerless to stop the trial is stupid. How many situations in cannon were sweeped under the rug by Hiruzen and Danzo. And don't say about "witnesses". If Hiruzen really wanted it swept under the rug, he could have said anything and it would be believed. 3. The family part- After this trial thing, MC should honestly tell them that he just came back from war as a hero, and if they care more about honor than him, then he'll have nothing to do with them.....
50% of Tobirama was enough to defeat Kage level. So, 70% should be more than enough to intimidate Hiruzen if needed. Remember, it was only after Hashirama and Tobirama's death, that everyone started calling themselves strongest (Onoki, Hiruzen, Hanzo of the Salamander, etc.). Earlier, they didn't have the guts to do it. It would be good if the MC doesn't accept this like Sakumo did in cannon....
Thanks for the chapter. So, he sent the Dursleys away, without punishment, and even have them monetary rewards (company shares, house). You gave your reasons, but shouldn't there be consequences to actions. It's almost the same situation with Snape- "he's spying for us, so he's redeemed"; or Malfoys- "they left Voldy in the end, so they should be forgiven"... No, that doesn't/shouldn't excuse their actions, right?