Izumi_Aley

Good to know. We'll do consider inpriving Tochinleif in future plot

Nothing much to say, the story is good, but it need a tincy little dept of capturing the character blending with the environment. Overall this is a good story.

I felt this story is somewhat cruel, yet dark at the same time. I'm looking forward to reading chapter by chapter as I'm hook with the animosity tone surrounding the atmosphere as I read the dialogue. Furthermore, I give this story a chance to read as it's amazing for a darker theme in webnovel.

After reading the 2 chapters it feels relatable to be honest. Something like how Society run. I don't expect high for this story since it's like the usual romance in the mainstream media. Not saying I hate this story, but it's promising for to say at least.

Ahh, The Los vegas feeling

Is this some type of game??

Such an amazing set up for an underdog story. I'm compelled that he endured various abuse from the royal family, even for those bystander still treat him so harsh. Now I'm looking forward on how you introduce the world in the story and the magic system.

I pity you, Alexander. However, your name has a meaning that you are always the great.

I knew it. Such tragic man born from a wrong family.