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Firstly, thanks for the chapter Secondly, I want to say something. You exaggerate in describing things to an unreasonable degree. This is a novel that has a bright future, but you are making it boring with all these descriptions. There are things that do not need this exaggeration in describing them. I hope I have conveyed the idea. Continue. This is a wonderful novel.