Lagash

nothing of note changes from the primary plot, so why the time travel stuff. Even after betrayal of Dumbledork our mc is still an idiotic and still goes to griffindork, still befriends the same people still an imbecilic moron.

Pushover MC.............................

I don't understand why this novel is rated 4.8. I enjoy the story, but the English is bad and the grammar is all over the place. I don't understand how this novel could be more than 3 stars. It does nothing new compared to other Naruto fanfic novels

MC, top of his class, given a garbage starter but girls think he's cool. somehow this garbage pokemon beats other pokemon because plot armor. He refuses help in his journey from rich parents. he usually just contradicts himself and whst he says throughout the story. Nothing special about this story. oh and Oak snaked him on good starters but he still fed oak ground breaking research for the free.

Random lines of dialogue are in badly translated Japanese. Couldn't even get past the first chapter. just shit.

If you are looking for a fanfic with plot, then this isn't it. This fanfic is simply a wish fulfillment novel. No plots whatsoever, just mc doing whatever he wants.

Stopt at Chapter 14 because you had to go with the original plot .... why not trying something creativ .... like him not becoming an nija at all and make the hokage beg vor him to rethink

Good enough writing but what made me drop this is that the kyuubi is a female and she can read his memories so she know about his past life and about their world plus the fact that the mc can not hold his tongue stupidly shouting stuff that might have had him killed I hate this kind of plot and MC so this is why the low rating.

I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.

I am extremely disappointed. 1/4 of the chapter are repites. He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent.