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Zomvenom

Zomvenom

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Survived a Hit and Run had major life changes. Internally decapitated myself, damaged my left leg muscles knee down to ankle, shattered left bicep, fractured right wrist.

2022-12-13 JoinedUnited States
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom9h
    Commented

    You forgot to end some of your sentences with periods and apostrophes. "Like this."

    Ch 126 Chapter 126
    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom9h
    Commented
    "Can we fix it? Yes, we can!" Peter said, opening the briefcase. He pulled out a green visor which he put over his eyes. He gave them a double tap, and as he did, little spider bots came crawling out.
    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom9h
    Commented
    "Pete... Sweetheart, you have no idea what else I'm into," Sue replied with a grin.
    Spider-Man 0X
    Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom9h
    Commented

    *I'm into."

    "Pete... Sweetheart, you have no idea what else I'm into," Sue replied with a grin.
    Spider-Man 0X
    Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom9h
    Commented

    You made a lot of grammar mistakes, but, you're making a great story even with them. Just, make sure to re-read what you're posting.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: My Hero
    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom10h
    Commented

    *.... make it."

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    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom10h
    Commented

    And why'd you type the next sentence starting with a capital? When the previous sentence ended with an comma?

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    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom10h
    Commented

    *"Kiddo,...

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    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom10h
    Commented

    This. Pick this.

    Capoeira
    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom14h
    Commented

    "....,Thank you."

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    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom14h
    Commented

    *Ma'am

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    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom17h
    Commented

    *"Is that....."

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    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom22h
    Commented
    Before growing a bit smug :"I guess you learned a thing or two from me in your universe." But that only earned her a bunch of Boombastic side eyes.
    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
    Anime & Comics · That_One_Dead_Ali
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom1d
    Replied to Pino_3

    I'm pretty sure there's much better people who can adapt when they get hit. But they escape my mind.

    "Haha, come. I will show you what I have gained," Gramps replies, amused and equally excited. He ignores the flames because the moment they touch his skin, his skin for a very brief moment burns, but then starts to change and adapt a metallic sheen that counter the flames.
    HP: The Big Bad Wolf
    Book&Literature · Ikaru5
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom1d
    Commented

    *.... too far."

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    I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · THE_V1S1ON
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom1d
    Commented

    amongst *themselves

    Iris and Tracey giggled amongst them as they were given the royal treatment.
    HP: The Magical Gamer
    Book&Literature · Kitamari
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom1d
    Replied to Lacyluc

    No, I mean this. Because it's funnier and it's Doofenshmirts. I'm sure I spelled that wrong, but y'all know what I mean.

    I stared at lines of code dancing across my screen. Creating an artificial intelligence was an easy task for him since he had a ridiculous amount of intellect that was similar to doofenshmirtz.
    I am Morty Sanchez
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom1d
    Commented

    *he followed her

    Today is the fifth day after Rin made her graduation decision this year. As usual, she followed her to the Academy and tried to escape. The opportunity would come later, even though she had been waiting for four days.
    Naruto: Paws and Whiskers
    Anime & Comics · 8Ashes8
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom1d
    Commented

    *Apart

    Aizawa glanced back and replied, "I'm not sure. He was perfectly fine just a moment ago. Did something happen while I was away?" Away? Apat from Rin asking Guy to take him home, and there was nothing wrong in that. Rin pondered for a while. Eventually, she thought of a possibility...
    Naruto: Paws and Whiskers
    Anime & Comics · 8Ashes8
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  • Zomvenom
    Zomvenom1d
    Commented
    Alex couldn't help but laugh in her head when she heard her, [You just went through a very overwhelming experience. I'll take you back to Wakanda for a nap. You can return once you've recovered sufficiently. Wong is also going to be out for a while.
    Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
    Movies · Addyctive7
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