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well at least your alive thank goodness, glad you been busy with life, hope its the good busy, if you having the block not feeling it, its okay it just happens sometimes, take it a back and write something you enjoy, something new/old just don't lose yourself to not enjoying writing.
of course it be in a tree, devs are not on the players side ever, only for there entertainment do they do things (and money )
she better stay till the end, sha has a better chance in the new world then in earth for a chance at a relationship, she could get a rimuru body to, it be so cute
don't ask how i have this...
haha no problem, i love you're work,i really do like slow building of characters of there personality and power, because if everything is like *snap* power up, power up , level up, its just get old fast, don't get me wrong i love OverPower characters my favorite anime is Overlord haha, but it takes great writing to do it justice from the beginning of a story to be OP, building characters to be power is great story telling, actually see/reading how they grow is fun.your MC is great even though he knows about the anime he's not guessing what other people like Rose or Naaza are going to say or act sure maybe at the first meeting he'll think he knows whats going to happen but when is doesn't he started to treat them more closely, um closely not the word but more like a human, anyway i don't want to say all this without say, don't put to much pressure on yourself if you can't handle it, and i don't mean it harm way, some people work well under pressure and some can't handle it, go at this story at your own pace and inspiration remember to take breaks cuz you don't want to get a writers block, trust me it kills a lot of storys r.i.p, hope for the best in you, just letting you know people like your story don't let the hate comments get to you, all the love to you
i enjoy world building and character interactions very much because i like the story to actually make me feel how hard or how easy somethings goes for the protagonist, its almost like acting, any actor can say 'ouch' but it feels flat, now an actor that moves with the impact and flinchs as if in real pain now thats world building, your odr is very complex character i like that i still don't understand him sometimes and other times he's gives me a suprise on how he acts to others, just keep doing what your doing, i don't know about others but i'm enjoying it very much
nice a long chapter love that to relax on the couch and read, now for your qquestion on smaller chapters, i have no problem except when you focus on character interactions as long as the interactions are detailed as in the long chapter's its good, short chapters are notorious for not giving enough world building and character building they just cut to the "on" "good parts" *me saying sarcastically*, as long as you avoid that, i think short wouldn't be a problem
omg so satisfying i love thos chapter so much i can't put into words, btw love that Oberon actually fainted doing something so big, lots of stories just make the MC just be tried or it feels nothing to them, or they black out and its the next day and we know nothing about what happened, like i get it first POV and stuff, but i like your set up better its more world built for other characters to 10/10 Oberon wins best MC10/10 best wiring
ooh nice understandable, though i'm person thats preoccupy with mostly romance, comedy is another weakness of mine thats hard to find good comedy ones like your doing right now.
yay super excited for the next chapter btw is this single pair? or harem or just 2 to 3 girl's if your not sure or just going with the flow of the story i would rather you don't answer just to be sure, personally i don't care as long as its good read XD
hahaha yes that be hilarious, and every time he updates his falna the percentage keeps rising with out him doing anything but try to avoid her
omg hahaha now he has to get freya interested in him some how and keep her interested plus refusing her every advancement with her easy to anger familia
ohh are you also going to make the yakuza game to?
Q: can it be Riveria? or is it that she to close related? even if it was not pairing, i feel Kiyotaka/Aleus could learn a lot of affection from Riveria, even if he decides to try and manipulate Riveria it be a challenge to do. I wouldn't mind it be ryuu or ais, ryu would be interesting it be full of drama, it be a nice pairing, i would like to mention Filvis. now thats a real broken mes, kiyotaka/Aleus would gain a real good tool and it would match her background with his in abuse Filvis is my second choice is Riveria is not a choice
1 i wouldn't be a person anime of cultural if i didn't like harems, my dream harem story is a harem full of only elves/elf/ from danmachi
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