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The MC never matures, he goes from woman to woman and just leaves the oldest ones he had behind and not even caring about them. I like novels with harems, but this is too much even for me, by the end he will probably have close to 100 women. All the MC does is take shortcuts, he never develops his powers.
The author for some reason forgot all about MC's achievements until now. The mc who could prev. kill devils with lvl 1k+ is now struggling with creatures with lvl300+. He essentially scraped the whole devil hunt arc, and made some BS mystery faction.
The novel has a lot of potential, but the author seams to be making stuff up as he goes, forgets about things(buying house and car in rl), he forgets about skill level(divine blade), we never learn about what lvl the mc is after the initial chapters etc. The fact that the mc takes almost every woman he meats into the bead despide having a gf is also questionable. Please take some time to check what you write, the novel has great potential but rushing it is destroying it.
it's supposed to be samar
I understand that, but try to compact it more. And the fight of Rudras vs Perfect warrior is just repetitive and boring. If he is going to go 100 rounds and each round gets its own chapter it's just boring, just make 1 or 2 chapters where it's mentioned what he figured out in the fights when he contacts Max.
Can we get the boring frawn out chapters out of the way already? Rudra fighting the perfect warior 100X to figure out a way to beat him does not need its own chapters and max doing some boring stuff also does not need to be drawn out. Stop trying to prolong the novel.