TheErraticRaccoon

There is but only one answer. He who understands, cares and wouldn’t, couldn’t, ever tell anyone else your deepest secrets. I present to you;

So far, phenomenal. Fresh, unique, and has an almost unbelievable amount of intrigue in every chapter. I hope, pray, that the consistency continues the way it has, and seems to be going. Though, I hope the author doesn’t make pitying the mc a too-common occurrence. Lord knows he deserves it though.

Many thanks!

In re-reading the previous few chapters in concession, I can see that I rely a lot on facial expressions for emotion. I know why I did this, for the face is the most emotive, but I am going to actively try and include more body language in future. Just thought I'd be transparent with my plans. Have a good one!

Oh dear visual readers, rejoice! This is the image I took reference to while I wrote about the wand. For reading pleasure, you can imagine this exact image as his wand. [img=recommend]

Thank you very much!

Many thanks, hadn't realised this as I could only recall Harry's usage. Have since changed, many thanks for the help!

Many thanks for pointing that out!

Changed, thank you for pointing that out for me!

In addition to my other comment, please picture the marking, in much the same design, extending down to the hand. Hope this helps.