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Names a female wold Max. Awkward character interactions. Most events make no sense. The female characters are mindless and just throw themselves at MC. Reduces your IQ the more you read. So read at your own risk !
I was optimistic about the story at the beginning but then it went downhill really fast. MC has a Blood Eater skills that consumes his kills and gives him stats in return. Consuming a killed enemy liquefies the body into blood that disappears after consumption. He needed to raid an orc settlement stealthily. You'd think Blood Eater is helpful in removing the bodies he kills while sneaking around. No. He kills several orcs, doesn't use the skill, gets noticed and chased, runs away and hides. Did he learn? No. Repeat. Then, he reaches the boss and his mana and stamina are empty. He will use the skill to gain some mana and stamina, right? No. He jumps at the boss cuz he wants to. He is lvl4, boss is lvl 12. Not a normal monster, a boss! then he kills the boss. Don't ask how and why. He just used a skill that consumed 20% of his mana before. He used it while his mana is empty then boss dead. Dones. He will use blood eater now to consume the body of the boss to gain some stats, right? No. He just leaves and goes back to town. Author forgot about the skill completely. Fun.
author, you should fix these chapters. I dropped this novel because this whole mini arc is retarded. using his blood eater ability could have helped him remain in hiding as no bodies will remain for the other orcs to notice. You are making the mc stupid deliberately and it’s quite annoying to read to the point where I kind of wanna drop it here and now. here are a few suggestions: Also 10% stat gain is way too much for the blood eater skill. 1% is more than enough to make him overpowered. 10% will break the whole system way early on. Not to mention that he gains stats on kill as well which doesn't make sense. should make it clear, free stat points on level up, 1% stat gain on kill that he must target one of his stats. that could also work well with different types of enemies. example, mage enemies will have more intelligence so if he targets intelligence with blood eater, then his gain from the skill should be more than if he targeted strength for that same enemy. Also, skill upgrades should be based on proficiency and not on level up. an good way to portray this is to give a percentage progress bar for skills. let's blood eater, the more he uses it, the more his proficiency progress bar grows, then once it reaches 100%, maybe give him a tough mission to gain an Blood Eater lvl2 skill book and so on. you can also make him level up the skill immediately at 100% but I find that way too cheesy. Also, level up after killing a few mobs is horrendous. There is no meaning in having levels if killing 1 mob levels you up. He should have gotten to level 2 after the boss fight. A mob monster should give less than 1% experience progress if near the level of the MC then x2 per level higher. That will make the progress have more meaning and killing monsters to level up an actual tough endeavor to undertake. there are many ideas to finetune the system further but I will stop here. The system and skills here have potential but the way author is handling the progress is utter trash so far. I will read a bit further just to give it a chance but I'm really not optimistic about this book so far. let's see.
MC pretending to have moral high ground while raping the girl who almost died trying to rescue him is a level of trash i never imagined I'd witness. i don't mind reading stories with antihero or villain MC but there are no villain or antihero tags on this story and the first 39 chapters were manageable despite the weak writing and silly power the mc had. Then chapter 40 happened and the MC, pretending to be a good boy while literally raping and mind controlling a girl who did everything trying to rescue him almost gave me aneurysm due to how retarded that shit was. i love writing good criticism in my reviews of the books i read but this book doesn't deserve that level of consideration. This is just to tell the author and his book to take a hike. plz.
Mediocre story that is not bad but has the worst sex scenes I've ever read in a story. it's such a turn off. I am not sure the author even understands how sex works. MC makes every girl scream in pain and he keeps going like it's not his problem. That's how ALL the sex scenes go. Not once or twice. ALL! On top of the sex scenes being completely moronic, author wanted the MC to do one girl by force but didn't want him to be blamed or get the (r) tag so he made one of the side characters around the MC drug her for him because he wanted her to be a part of the MC's group. Then the MC was like "Oh she is like that so uhh I need to save her!". He knew that the side character wanted to drug her. the mc was the one who collected the ingredient for the medicine the side character made. That asspull felt so cheap that Black-Friday had been silent ever since. You want the MC to do that kind of shit? that's fine! there is a 'villain' tag for that and i dont mind reading such stories. it's just the audacity to have the MC do it and then the author framing it as if a passing accident just happened that MC didn't see coming. If you can absorb such content without having an aneurysm and/or getting your brain melted, read it. The story isn't trash level. it's readable if you have nothing else to read. Not for me though so yeah, bye!
This mc is a complete retard. The author is forcing this drama shit way too much. Even Kirito didn't act this stupid.