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Asel2132 days agoCommentedMany people don't know this or don't want to accept it, but we are slaves to hormones. The idea that you have past life experiences does not protect you from the mistakes of a young body when you are emotionally unstable compared to an adult.
- Asel21319 days agoCommented
Is he a commoner without a last name?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Asel213a month agoCommented
Oh my god, what nonsense. Muggles can't know about the leaky cauldron, or is this a hint that his guardians are also wizards.
- Asel213a month agoCommented
Pfft, the main character literally used a magic wand in chapter 2 in the penultimate paragraph.
- Asel213a month agoCommented
The author is too lazy to come up with ideas!
- Asel213a month agoCommented
What does this even mean?
- Asel2132 months agoReplied to WackySpace
This is what happens when an author doesn't care about the time frame of a story.
- Asel2132 months agoCommented
The numbers are so large that it is difficult for the author to write their sequence correctly.
- Asel2132 months agoCommented
And Ollivander knows that wizards also use his wands for food.
- Asel2133 months agoPosted
Why make such a complicated beginning. This amount of unnecessary information gave me a headache. Next time, do it gradually, and don't turn everything into a dump where you just dump information.
