Lorenzo_Oram

nice story cool ability overall would be a great pass time story to read as long as you can look ppas the one and two mistakes

great story so far I love it I just wish for more chapters

good stuff

that's cold to tell someone dad that

yeah please don't

thanks for the chapter but when will the next come in so interested

it's not bad it seems quite interesting

I like it translation is a little rough but nothing you can't get used to if you decide to read I like it[img=More pls]

it a really interesting story with tons of potential I hope you continue writing it sincerely

so yrue