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Ooooooh! Naruto version of Fujitora.
He's my fave character as well... I actually thought that Naruto would use his talk no jutsu on him.
maybe in this timeline, Kakashi will have the habbit of smoking 'IF' Asuma died.
Whitebeard is the only character in One Piece that didn't have to name and shout his moves in order to prove his strength.
Green haired girl, on the roof(flying?), arms crossed... yup that's Tatsumaki .
I was thinking about Mamoswine or Great Tusk but Copperaja is fine [img=update][img=strong]
Am not really a fan of Hashirama and when they show his idea of peace.... Madara is more fitting as the First Hokage of Konoha.
He should've done what Aizen did to Ichigo
I know it's been 8mths after this comment was posted but I agree and this is my second time rereading this Fanfic
This is getting really boring. I know World Building is important to a story but it starts to annoy me starting from the meeting. How many chapters does it take to finish that the meeting? I know we've been reading this for free but man too many wasted chapters with unimportant rambling.... Sorry if it hurts the author, it's just my honest review... I'm really sorry