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Renette_Pietersen1yrPostedTo put it mildly, I am in love with this story so far. I would love to read the whole novel and devour every chapter. The Author's notes are super because they taught me things I didn't know. And the descriptions withing the novel are very good. I am looking forward to future chapters and I have to say I LOVE TATUM the MC he/she is too cute.[img=update]
- Renette_Pietersen1yrCommentedCh 11 Lets play pretend.
- Renette_Pietersen1yrCommentedCh 7 My mum’s blueberry pancakes are perfection
- Renette_Pietersen1yrCommented
The way to a man's heart is through his TUMMY!
The aroma became so captivating; the newfound hunger began to claw at his stomach, painful in its intensity. But the renewed wave of fury wasn't far behind as he spotted a dark head—the flowing locks now tied in a knot—bent over the stove, the buttery scent like a siren call to senses long denied. She was dancing while cooking and it was captivating, she wasn't the most voluptuous woman but she had the figure of a gymnast lithe and sleek so unlike what he usually found appealing. He kept staring at her so intently that in his arousal he released a waft of pheromones without realising it. - Renette_Pietersen1yrCommented
I think Gardenias and fresh cut grass sound like a great smell. Keep up the imaginative writing. [img=update]
Andrew's gaze devoured the beautiful woman standing less than a foot away from him, lush midnight-black hair haloed around her head, deep dark brown eyes—too large in her delicate heart-shaped face—sheened with shock, while her full pink lips dropped open in a perfect O. She wore no makeup, but somehow her colouring seemed even purer, more tempting—her translucent skin given a lustrous glow in the single beam of light. And the soft smell of gardenias and freshly cut grass surrounded her, it had the oddest effect of calming his nerves but quickening his heart rate in an erotic way. - Renette_Pietersen1yrCommented
Sculpted cheekbones and dark brow... sound very handsome, I really love the descriptions in this novel so far.
Tatum swung round to see a heavily muscled body looming over his slender figure more suited to a petite woman than a man, his heart raced and his eyes became saucers this man was huge. The stream of light glinted off sculpted cheekbones, slanted across dark brows and caught the gold rays in the hair touching his shoulders. Tatum scrambled back a step, the stream of swear words—in graphic English this time—making his cheeks ignite and settling in that forbidden spot between his thighs. Then a disturbingly lucid voice demanded.