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The story is fun and interesting. A little too fast paced sometimes, i think a little more discription would be nice. I loved how unique and distinctive the characters are. I think I'm in love with the lead's bsf, heh
At first I thought it was another of those webnovel story with weird plot and sound effects (it is what it is 😅) But oh boy, when I read the first chapter I was shocked! Writing quality is top notch, story development is stable and not too fast or slow, the characters have interesting names and the world building is also original!
The book is very interesting and unique! I've never read about a protagonist like this one! The plot seems to be solid and well thought out. The only problem is the grammar, sometimes the capital letters are missing. Also I would recommend writing dialogues in separate paras. Overall, if you like reading about a protagonist fighting with his own feelings and mentality, this is for you![img=recommend]