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Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

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2022-12-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Commented

    The passage was not completely displayed on the screen. it was cut out .

    After making sure that everything was not an illusion, Li Xiaonian laughed happily, and tears streamed down his face uncontrollably, which were tears of excitement.
    Starting With A Space Battleship
    Games · Silence Doesn't Mean Low-Key
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Commented

    Please be watchful of some typographic errors

    "Hello, how many I help you?"
    Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates
    Urban · Cold Fried Anchovies
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Posted

    I love the concept of the story but what inferiorates me is the hiding of OP skills for too much. It's a taboo already and a cliche!

    Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime
    Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Commented

    am so done with hiding strength.

    If his strength was exposed too early, it might cause some trouble.
    Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime
    Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Commented

    there should be devour in the sequence. my Ghaaaawwwd!

    [Sequence]: Perception, Split, Regeneration
    Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime
    Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Commented

    On the previous chapter the body size is already 15% and now it's back again to 9%. Please correct this and pay more attention to details.

    [Body Size]: 9%
    Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime
    Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Posted

    I love the characters and how the plot is hitting the climax but there's something that's missing with the plot.

    Forced
    LGBT+ · imagineuphoria
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  • Marcus_Marcus_Lpt
    Marcus_Marcus_Lpt1yr
    Posted

    Amazing plot and I so like the MC . Hope to read more of this ❤️

    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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