Thank you for the comment, i appriciete your point ov view. You are right, this chapter was a little poor in plot development. Don't worry, this kind of over the top comedy will not be frequent.

Thank you for the feedback! You are right, this chapter is a bit too much. Don't worry, while not overly serious, th MC will have his moments.

I'm happy you like it! Thanks for the comment

Thank you my friend for the support, it means a lot!

You are right!! What a noob mistake i did...

Rituals will definitey be used in the future. I don't want to rush the story too much right now. Thanks for the comment

I was already thinking about rituals, but that's something for later in the plot i think

That's a really good idea!