This is very well written, pure fiction and good story lines. It's very entertaining with characters that keeps it engaging and colorful. I hope that the story progress more, keep up the good work

This is a well-crafted cultivation story, a very compelling narration that makes the reader consume more. Well-paced and detailed and engaging characters that stood out from the rest. Added to library

Can you add the monster to his harem? Gore is good, all the time👍

A nightmare's reality?

Fielma has twin braids, black hair, purple eyes and a young appearance

Sweet, slow-paced jelly, the story has a good scenery of a slice-of-life genre. There's a bit of an unexpected turn here and there, but so far so good. The writing is very good in terms of pacing and grammar.Keep up the good work.

Puberty

But the council of yuri approves

What makes a better series? "Gay girls in it" - Gigguk

Sweet Saccharine Cheeze!

Chad

Big Breast is Life, but Flat is Holy and Divine

I just read the summary, but is this smut?

This is a piece of strong writing, you could feel the emotion of the characters and uses descriptive language to portray what's going on, it's so vivid and each paragraph is coherent, running at a good pace. It uses more showing than telling and is executed perfectly. The introduction is intriguing enough to force readers to flip to the next page.

There's a thick emotion in this dialogue, it's so good

This is really a vivid chapter and strong writing, I like it

I could see that this story is a type of writing close to the Author's heart. It has decent grammar, and an intriguing system that Isekai and System fans may like. The starting chapter shows a glimpse of what may happen in the future that let the reader anticipate what process will he do to get there. Anyway, this is a nice story with great potential

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