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  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax676 months ago
    Posted

    It's not that good but not bad either need more improvement's for the story anyways good luck author I'm sure you'll do well

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax676 months ago
    Replied to looser_cuck

    update

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax676 months ago
    Posted

    don't drop it continue πŸ˜˜πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ§‘β€οΈπŸ˜Š the shit is good 😊

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax676 months ago
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    😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
    Posted

    nice book it's very similar From book i read I think it's called Twin Cities: Unlimited Rewards for the Beginning of the War

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
    Commented

    thanks for the update πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
    Commented

    thanks for the update πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
    Posted

    Yep this is a good one thanks for posting this story I love it so far good luck

  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
    Replied to depravitymax67

    Yeah another thing Author This story will be shit if you fcking mess up the harem bruh you don't need to rush the development of harem like goddamn don't make the harem a pokemon catching game like shit don't make escanor keep getting them girls so easy

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  • depravitymax67
    depravitymax67a year ago
    Posted

    Bruh everything Happens so fast like Goddamn almost every chapter escanor got a power up ahhahah Initially I'm Expecting Like there will be a training arc or something,You know something like a weak to becoming overpowered Escanor you know like getting to know his power but damnnn plus I think author need to slow down his moves in terms of romance I feel like its very rushedalthough in terms of story not bad but sometimes I cringed when I read some lines when I'm his son bullshit of escanor sorry my bad this is a good story but needs more improvement keep up the good work though I'm expecting more of your works being better

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