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geoffrey_mulema1yrPostedI'm rating this novel after reading 13 chapters. writing quality is good and it's easy to understand the story. There's very few mistakes which is obvious in most stories, even popular novels. I liked the story development, the pacing is good which makes the novel to flow smoothly. Character design is pretty good, introducing one character at a time. There's no confusion of characters or introducing more than two author's in one time. Updating stability is stable, I can't talk much about it, lol. World background is good by now, I mean the 13 chapter. We know little about Amira, Lady Serena, Adonis who's Amira's father, Leonard and other minor characters. All I can say is good job author! I'll continue to support you and I wish you all the best in your writing. If you love a strong FL, historical romance and revenge, I think you should give this book a chance. Sorry for writing such a long review author.
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"Why did you decide to join this competition?"Amira asked with a smile on her lips. She tried to sound normal so that Ravenna wouldn't realise anything. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
She's beautiful from the author's description
"I believe you'll be the most beautiful contestant."Lady Serena tried to cheer up her granddaughter who looked tensed. A deep frown settled on the young miss's features. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Lazy girlđ
Amira pulled the warm blankets to cover herself as the sleep kept on screaming her name. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Wheređł
"What about we go to our peace spot?"He asked with a raised eyebrow. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
I still have so many questions dear author. like, how did this two meet many years ago?
"I think I saw her,"Prince Zebulon said with a serious voice. Malachi's eyes widened when he heard the Prince's words. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
I like your description author
Prince Zebulon looked into the distance as he didn't look at anything in particular. His mind was miles away from his body. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Our ml
Meanwhile in the castle, inside a big room which had a king-sized bed and most of the things were moulded using gold, a man stood at the window. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Please say yes grandma
"Can you sleep with me, grandma?"She asked with gentle eyes and moved to the left side of the bed as she created space for her grandma. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Cliffhanger againđ
"Here..."She handed Leonard the letter she was holding in her hand. Leon creased his eyebrows in confusion. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
So sweet
"Thank you." Amira said and laid her head on Leon's shoulder with a smile on her face. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
I don't think so too
" Do you think they'll listen to you if you tell them that Commander Adonis is innocent?"Amira asked with raised eyebrows,her head tilted to the right challengingly. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
I'm jealousy of there friendship
They hugged each other tightly and Amira cried in his arms while Leon patted her back, trying to calm her down. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Instead, you hurt her bro
"We were just trying to protect you, Amira."Leonard sat next to Amira who was now sobbing faintly and pulled her into a hug. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Of course she wants to save her father
"Why did you join the competition? Don't you know it's dangerous? What if they find out that you're Commander Adonis's daughter? What will happen?"Leonard decided to go straight to the point. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Who's there?
"Knock knock." - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
You're so sweet grandma
"You need to freshen up dear,go to your room and get changed as I prepare a warm bath for you." - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
Good thinking grandma
"What if you win the bride-choosing competition? You'll be required to leave your family so that you can go to live in the castle."Lady Serena reminded Amira and sat on the couch next to her. - geoffrey_mulema1yrCommented
You remind me of maroon 5
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