Dr_Squalid

yes

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The reason why I wrote "never" is because I wanted to convey a time component to [Fragile]. The reason why the Flagon is fragile is not only because it is brittle but also because the damage won't recover while in the Soul Sea. But I do agree that "can not" could have also conveyed it, my bad I guess.

I regularly find myself more entertained with OCs woven into the world and their adventure with no previous knowledge rather than reincarnators being aware of the plot or having no real connections to the world.

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I also think so. Unfortunately I am not a good enough writer to describe a duel between someone who knows nothing about swords and an experienced user, sorry. Maybe as the story progress I improve and be able to do it

Mandatory Author 5 star review. I am new to the writing Fan-fiction scene but I have always been an avid reader, so please tell me what you think of my writing. I will use the rest of this review as a way to explain somethings about this book. I have planned this book in my mind up to the beginning of Volume 3 (After Talvir becomes an Awakened), and for your information yes I plan to integrate him to Sunny's circle around the later half of Volume 2, I know some people dislike this approach but a truly believe that it is going to feel organic for a couple reasons, which I will not explain here (read the book gaddamit). The main character IS NOT going to be overpowered from the beggining I want him to grow and change with challenges must like the original characters did, for me it is the most beautiful part of their adventure. Also, I dont know if there will be romance, however if I feel like it fits and is logic that two characters grow feelings for each other I may include it (if I do I will add the tag. Thats all, my writing schedule is 1 to 2 chapters every 1 to 2 days. So enjoy the story and I hope you have a great experience!

The pacing of the story feels natural with an extensive focus in character development and relationships. The translation quality is very high and I hope it keeps going. Keep up the good work!

Congrats on the first chapter being number 1 monthly