Fatium?

....Now that's interesting

Here it starts

Our lord and saviour!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Damn I can exactly see why this is one of the toppest fantasy on webnovel

Mystery....+1

The author is not at the level just yet. The writing quality is good, not the best nor unreadable. The story is fast-paced in starting chapters, but the author says it is intentional. The plot is the best part of the novel if you ask me. The mystery is prevalent throughout the chapters. Answering some questions, but leaving most of them unanswered for the story forward. I like this story, I'll be here for all of it.

You set up the standard too high guilty. i don't think, there is even any competition for your book.

baka sunny

tsundere?

Not an original idea but still pretty neat.

I don't think so. The outline is interesting but the world building is bland. Let see where it goes