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Ghost spider is a vice admiral I believe
Its really good so far! Try to shorten his skills list so you dont have to write it everytime and continue using grammarly or maybe even google docs
Its a really good idea and story but try to put it through grammarly first to fix the grammar. KEEP IT UP!!
Honest opinion, its a good novek personally I like it but the writing quality is EXTREMELY bad. Author please use CHATGPT to fix this problem its really bad. An example in this novel is chapter 11, it calls the new world "United States" all in all its badly translated to the extreme yet its a good concept.
Im guessing this is him
The best way I can see this is from rick and morty the hive who controlled planets look it up
Bro I like the novel but please put it through chatgpt and look through it, its readable but the names are scuffed like bro in chapter 11 it mentions United States in the new world of one piece like bro what?
I think the author is right though, chakra is awakened by other people helping open the pathways although they can do it by themselves its hard. Keep in mind as well there are multiple wars and its possible parents send them to the schools so they can have a better life. Also why are nukenins going the vilkage?
Its a really good book but the transitioning needs work since I get confused, mainly the time skip
Thank you!
He has a daughter
He was in marines
yo take ur time most fanfics on here throw it together so thank u for actually investing time appreciate u
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Im not too sure but cant they notice your a ghoul since they have an extreme sense of smell. There sense of smell is shown when they find out kaneki is a one eye'd ghoul since he smelt like both
Currently he is extremely strong I would add it but make it harder and harder to achieve this state since he is around sengokus level show in the war of best