So... You refused the whole ULTRAKILL and master Hakita himself... ... for another cliché Arifureta OP Humie? ... I'm not blame you. This is your fanfic. Erasing it, or continue the story - it's only your choice. But i will not read this. There is more unique and interesting things to explore, than another Arifureta FC. Goodbye, Author. Former blood machine, and now - just blood pack. Take this Gabriel Gif.

Indeed.

I have a special relationship with the DXD universe.I believe that this universe is, metaphorically, a monolithic foundation that will withstand the whole city... but a toilet stall was built on it, covered with posters of an erotic nature. It is great for creating fan stories, because you can create anything based on it. As an excellent work, so is the dump of the Pokemon harem.The author of this work has built a beautiful creation, without unnecessary garbage. Plus – I didn't notice any problems with grammar.(Although what do I care about grammar? I read through a translator and am used to the breakdown of the meaning of the text in other works.)The work is fascinating. Funny - where it's needed.The only downside is the frequency of chapter updates. The author sacrifices the speed of the release of chapters for the sake of quality.(Yes, yes. Talk to me here - a man who in his work releases a chapter every two months or more! Ah, DegroHagrid?!)My respects to the nobleman who wrote this work!I put a solid deserved 5★And remember. A good Thor is a sober Thor!

*Sounds of aggressive [E] button spam*

I could talk about Ultrakill... But seriously, does this masterpiece need an introduction? Does the pure humor of this game's contingent need to be introduced? And the fact that a text version comes out of it is excellent! This will allow for more blood packs... *Ahem* I mean readers to learn about this creation by Master Hakita... and maybe even become part of a brutal, humorous and a little crazy (Due to the overdose of the action and the complexity of the game) community, and touch the masterpiece yourself? For this I give 5 stars. And remember! If you meet guys who, upon seeing you, start throwing coins in the air... you're finished.

Thank you very much for such an interesting story. Seriously, when I started reading, I thought that this story would be another work, in which once again there would be an annoying clichéd system and a boring plot like Cultivation. But it's not. This book is my little breath of fresh air, after the stuffy monotony that this site has. The work hooked me, and I began to read it non-stop ... until paid chapters appeared. I, as the same creator as you, cannot understand - why are they needed at all? Why limit readers? *sigh* Paid chapters and cliches are two of the main reasons why I rarely read original works like yours. All the best to you, even though I will not see the continuation of this story ... like many other stories before this one. [If there are errors here - do not judge strictly! English is not my native language.]

Oh no! V1 will be ballin! ... But seriously - Thank you for continuing to write this creation! I have one suggestion that will make this work better: Make the chapters a little bigger. But only if you are not going to create chapters regularly! P.S: I do not have a [English language] issues!

Wait... The Kali family, which wielded forbidden magic, was destroyed... Scarlet brimstone flame... And the name itself – Kali... This reminds me of something... ["Stained, Brutal, Calamity" starts playing louder]

I hope V1 won't be ballin.

"Honestly I don't really found joy in playing with balls, or hitting the ball with something" That means... he never be ballin.