LegendRiser_X9

Facts!

I honestly don’t know why this novel isn’t more popular, the writings quality is good the story is well paced, it’s a really fun read just a little cliche.

It’s a super fun novel no 10 chapters of insults for 1 chapter of face slapping, a simple insult me once I exterminate 9 generations of your clan, kind of novel my one issue is the world building they’re is none the story just follows the Mc so where he goes, that’s all we get to see.

Your a useless garbage author

So what was the scenario that got your novel cancelled.

What a waste of time, the coolest thing about Dabi Is his unique design his scars and stitches and you take it way for what to make him look normal it fundamentally destroys his character you bastardized a character for your own lack of inspiration.

Been A while my old advisory, congratulations on your novel’s success.

What the hell is this, chapter I really thought I found a masterpiece until you ruined you own story.

A good novel, intelligent Mc, well rounded story; just kinda in its nacent stage. Very few translation flaws, it’s just the character design is nonexistent and the world background/building doesn’t seem to have depth. Note to author if he ever changes his ser name could it be stormborn. I think a “the storm born kight order” has a nice ring to it.

I’m always very harsh with intelligent system novels simply because I look for three things, pacing does the Mc become extremely strong within a year of the story’s time line if yes, the novel is a 2 star. Secondly does the intelligence require the Mc the be smart and calculating or just throws him a stupid amount of god Teir opportunities, lastly side characters this novel has no side characters just a Mc and a few mindless robots.