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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
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    He could just asked for omnipotent's right there , which is solo possessed by his soul and that would have been great .

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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
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    No bro please .

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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
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    Why not just give him omnipotent as he is a boundless teir person , you wouldn't have to write so much abilities of the mc . And please make the MC that doesn't have system . It would be amazing that way . I personally am just to tired of All giving system when mc himself can to it all by himself . It doesn't change a thing but only make the mc lazy and weak without his so called loyal system .

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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
    Replied to IDontCare

    Thanks bro

    Ch 2 The Mist Is Twisted
    An Archangel In Percy Jackson
    Book&Literature · IDontCare
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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
    Replied to IDontCare

    Bro , I suggest you make a person reincarnated as Archangel Michael ( with his power's being the power's of Michael from DC or the supernatural TV show ) . Moreover , you could send the mc to anywhere in the multiverse or any other verse you want to . It would be a good start that way . Additional , make your story a little complex and write alot more in the chapter and also explain the character's more deeply which would make the story more realistic that way .

    Ch 2 The Mist Is Twisted
    An Archangel In Percy Jackson
    Book&Literature · IDontCare
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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
    Replied to whitebear2123

    okay

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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
    Commented

    Helel is a good name too .

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    Highschool DxD : The Wrathful son
    Anime & Comics · Argent1971
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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
    Commented

    Also by Lucifer , I ment Helel .

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    Highschool DxD : The Wrathful son
    Anime & Comics · Argent1971
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  • MichaelDemiurgos
    MichaelDemiurgos1yr
    Commented

    Please change his name to something cooler . You could also name him as Lucifer it self or Noah

    Ch 1 Info but contains spoilers so be advised
    Highschool DxD : The Wrathful son
    Anime & Comics · Argent1971
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