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I hate all this, I really hate all this. I know he’s supposedly the only one who cares right now (besides the girl who’s his BFF at the barracks), but don’t you think the way you handled the timeline made it seem like not much time has passed? And that’s why the main character’s devotion comes across as too fake, rushed, or—I don’t know—an obsession. I’m giving up on this book; she drives me crazy, and honestly, it’s because the way you portray the MC is like she’s a love seeker—I mean, she’s not going to grow unless she has love—which makes her seem masochistic because the guy is just treating her like one of the soldiers, but in her delusional head, is there hope? I mean, why would you stay in the hospital for so long for a captain you’re only physically attracted to—since he hasn’t given you anything else or had any interactions with you besides training you? She’s delusional and just looking for someone to cling to and beg for love. Bye, good luck with your novel.

Do you really have time to feel bad for him? Can you afford that luxury? Dumb btch, worry about yourself. He became a captain because he’s strong and resourceful. Do you really think your “I feel bad for him” is enough? And besides, do you even have time to like someone else after what happened with your family?????

que porquería, literalmente una maldita pesadilla, para acabar esta bien jodido emocionalmente y físicamente, y con la nueva herida de abandono, vaya vida de mierda. (la verdad no entiendo porque los autores, ponen a los MC en situaciones tan jodidas emocionalmente, mucha gente en esa posición terminan quitándose la vida)

lol

For someone who spent years complaining about having just one child—now imagine all the illegitimate children she’s going to have

son como robots, yo que ayude a cuidar dar a mis hermanos y primos se como se comportan los niños incluso los mejores bien portados no son como los que ella describe

love it, suena super cool

unstoppable

le mataste la mama, vio como mataron a su papá, vio como incendiaron su casa dime que te costaba que fue A, SOLO RANGO A, QUE TANTO DESARROLLO DE PERSONAJE QUIERES QUE TENGA EL POBRE NIÑOOOO

que te costabaaaaa dejarlo como rango S