uhhhhhh you'll see

I decided to take up your word for it and actually start improving the chapters

you have a good point there, but I decided on the first chapter I wasn't going to go too crazy same for the second and fourth chapter but for the fifth chapter I am going crazy

because he's a human and I want to make him relatable to the readers but yeah I am going to remove that part sooner or later

power eaters are made of pure energy they're not really a living entity they are it's just during a constant state of eating and consuming their energy and there isn't really a superior species of them because they're constantly evolving Matthew could do that and I might include it in the story. but it'll be very brief

long time since I've been an author which is why you see so many grammar errors.

ooh on this chapter or some other chapters if so I will try to fix them sorry for the mistakes

ooh

oh and by the way I don't like harems or any romance in my books so don't expect to see that

yeah I hope you like the next chapters and I wasn't really sure if you actually like the story based around your comment felt like you were a little disappointed at something of course I would like to know what that is but if you don't want to share it's all right

what rule did I just break?

Actually, I don't know why I did that I was just like hey this part will be very boring so why not just have a little fun in there, I'm going to do an oogway and say "it was the will of the universe"

ooh ok

he can do a lot more I'm just trying to figure out what abilities to give him

why what?

just like how he didn't invade his mom's mind to figure out what was happening he doesn't like messing with people's head that's part of the reason you don't see memory manipulation even though he can do it

ummm what was that comment about exactly?

uhhh maybe but don't expect much

thanks.that was actually really helpful even if you don't believe it so and the reason I like my comments is because I just thought why not.

yeah, currently he has Prismo level wish granting powers, 50 times stronger then the 10 tails and—let's not spoil anything.