Renegade_Lemur
I'm just a renegade Lemur from Konoha, my name is Julian Uchiha
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This is one of the worst stories I've ever read, It starts out interesting, but the character mostly gets lost along the way and becomes simply idiotic, stupid and doesn't match his initial personality, MC studied more than 5/6 years of his life in a military camp, but he has no discipline at all and is just a stupid person. He himself said that he only lost the military games 3 times and it was only when all the students at the military camp got together against him, but he was beaten by a simple Bully from a normal school. I tried a lot to read this story as the idea is very good, but it doesn't work, I dropped it
the fact that it is a pattern does not eliminate the fact that it is a function '-'
oh brotherly love
rock and stone forever!!
Thanks for the chapter, about the harem I have a question: The Ali we see in Ben 10 is the only one of Ali's souls that will have a woman, right? otherwise, when he merges into one again he will have to hurt all his companions by choosing only one, or hurting them all by choosing none.
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