ok_ok_1494

co-creater

+1

its weird half of the time you have no idea what is happening and the other half you are engaged and entertained by this fan fic. Hopefully the author keeps on updating and it gets better.

Its actually pretty good so far, hopefully you don't drop this author! Through I also wish that you could use something like Grammarly or even chat gpt to fish the grammatical issues.

...then its not the gamers mind...

i wanted to bash my head in because of all the grammatical and other mistakes in here...

wt heck, is Infront of every sentence.

the author is not smart enough to have thought of that.

where tfdid he get a cigarette from?