my own book💀

oh thank you very much!

Poor wiritng ten paragraphs into the first chapter, that's it. I'm outta here💀

let's get a general overview. the story is set in a futuristic world with flying cars, robots, and advanced technology. in this world, everyone has a brain crystal that gives them superpowers. our young protagonist, Erik is a bullied student with an F rank power who discovers a system that turns his life around. the world building is intricate to say the least. Pilgrim doesn't spare any effort when It comes to descriptions and paints a vivid image of the background in your head. his words flow together beautifully. the story starts out nice and slow, it doesn't rush the reader nor is it stressful on them. not much can be said about it as of now, it's still a bit early, but there are some rather exciting upcoming arcs which I'm looking forward to. updating stability is excellent too, a solid two chapters everyday. i would say Pilgrim's writing style could use a bit of work though, so could his character design. we'll certainly see improvements in the future. all in all a 10/10 for system lovers, if you're not reading, then i don't know what you're doing :3

so elephant in the room, let's address it, it's 99.99% the uncle.

Putin and Kim Jung-Un: let us introduce ourselves.

how chivarlous, ten vs one.

Ahhh, where have i heard something similar? XD

where dawg

i personally don't mind but, this sentence is incorrect. change "i remember to the host" to "i remind the host"

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oh my days, Oral intercourse🥵

bruh💀

he came back with the milk

hohoho chotto matte young man💀

Surprise surprise, it's the iron-skinned author reviewing his own book. well, it's a long-running ritual of Webnovel now, i had to comply. I've a lot of things planned for this novel, i hope you'll like it. you can ask Your Personal Caterpillar anything in this thread.

as a fellow Caterpillar, i approve of this work🐛

it's big brain time

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