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MERLIN_108

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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1081mth
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    Exactly

    The toxin made Ryo's feel somewhat weak on his legs. He felt drowsy and suffocated, and could only jump away to attack again. However, this was all that took Obito to jump to the two inside the fog, and disappear from the area with them.
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    Hokage Ryo's Path
    Others · nyawdao
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1082mth
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    Lauda

    Ch 47 Chapter 46: Dreams
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    Naruto: The Strongest Senju
    Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1088mth
    Replied to Blueflameh

    They just won’t rewrite It is a good story line but unreadable

    "Transfiguration is a rigorous and dangerous lesson, and anyone who doesn't listen to the lectures in class is going to give me a go-out!" Classes are now officially starting. "
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    Hogwarts: Start Fusion Phoenix Bloodline
    Book&Literature · Big_Big_0235
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1088mth
    Commented

    Horrible spell names author….keep the original ones please

    Ch 9 Chapter 9
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    Hogwarts: Start Fusion Phoenix Bloodline
    Book&Literature · Big_Big_0235
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1088mth
    Replied to dragon_born_5427

    Same question

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
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    Hogwarts: Start Fusion Phoenix Bloodline
    Book&Literature · Big_Big_0235
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1088mth
    Commented

    Please rewrite this….grammar is killing me

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Hogwarts: Start Fusion Phoenix Bloodline
    Book&Literature · Big_Big_0235
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1089mth
    Commented

    Mannn This is getting boring……

    Ch 22 Chapter 22
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    Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon
    Book&Literature · AidenCanis
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1089mth
    Commented

    Pal you’re missing a lot of full stops, comas and question marks…. Also, stop using “in” instead of “and”… Buy Grammarly…🤘

    Ch 18 Meeting a familiar figure()
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    Reincarnated in demon slayer as a uchiha.
    Anime & Comics · Ppp_Pppp
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  • MERLIN_108
    MERLIN_1089mth
    Commented

    Lessen the paragraphs pal More spaces….Less formal….add conversations….that’s all

    Ch 3 New life
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    Reincarnated in demon slayer as a uchiha
    Fantasy · Ppp_Pppp
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