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DuneEmpress1yrCommentedBright Glimmer of Hope! The titled name changed in translation!
Han Yu was a member of Light Dawn Demon Hunter Group, Long Haochen's faithful follower, and a retinue knight. At the same time, he was the owner of the Sealed Divine Throne of Fear and Sadness and was named the Sealed Divine Knight of Destruction and Forgiveness by Knight Temple.- DuneEmpress1yrCommented
Dispiseful
“Nonsense! This man doesn’t like men.” Because of the impulse, his voice became noisier, immediately attracting despiteful looks from the surroundings. But fortunately, the auction hall was dark, thus the surrounding people didn’t see clearly from where it came. - DuneEmpress1yrCommented
Reservation
At this time, Ah’Bao didn’t show any more reversation. An oppressive force full of an antique aura was released from his body, and his originally black spiritual energy turned a dark purple color. Even his eyes became completely purple. - DuneEmpress1yrCommentedCh 162 Mithril Foundation Armor (II)
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You mean ”interrogating” instead of “integrating”. Someone needs to edit before uploading.
Judging by the fact that the person integrating them didn't seem surprised by what they had said, it seemed like they had already gathered everything they needed from the other students and was just doing this as a formality. - DuneEmpress1yrCommented
Existed instead of exited?
Although the curfew still exited so they had to be back in their dorm rooms before ten in the evening and they were not allowed to leave the city. - DuneEmpress1yrPosted
The story was riveting except for the inconsistencies in the translation. Names were changing, different from the beginning of the story than to the last. There are also several gender errors and grammatical errors. Despite these mechanical errors, the story flowed seamlessly and the character build up was interesting. Good read but overly priced.
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Here again are inconsistencies in the naming, proof that we have a different writer/translator.
"Everyone must be wondering why I know this. I have to start from the beginning. When we, the Light Dawn Demon Hunter group, were still generals, we received a mission to explore the Fear Howling Cave found by the Devil clan. That task was regarded as a wrong order after we accepted it, which also caused an arise of circumstances at the Demon Hunter's Task Tower. However, we did complete that task." - DuneEmpress1yrCommented
Ah’Bao was the name of Po. Inconsistent translation/writing.
Po, who was also dressed in a luxurious black robe, stood quietly beside the God of Devils. His eyes were cold and hollow, as if he had no thoughts at all. - DuneEmpress1yrCommented
Whoever wrote these last chapters is different from the previous writer. There are inconsistencies with the names of the Demon Hunter Squad and the title of the Demon God. Someone should have edited!
Long Haochen looked at Hao Yue underneath his body and was shocked. Not only because of its strength and its beautiful body but also his own increased growth rate! The spiritual orifices increased from thirty-nine to fifty-seven which made him the first human being to achieve this. With the help of the Sealed Divine Throne of Eternity and Creation and Hao Yue, for the first time, Long Haochen had the confidence to challenge the God of Devils. His spiritual power also sublimated, and it was the outbreak of his spiritual power that shocked him the most.