Ive already read this story somewhere else fully translated years ago. This is either that story or a close clone of that story masquerading as something new.

All ntr stories get a 1 star review.All ntr stories get a 1 star review.All ntr stories get a 1 star review.All ntr stories get a 1 star review.All ntr stories get a 1 star review.

0 out of ten so far. Anytime you show us ntr, wether its normal ntr or netori, im gonna leave negative comments and 1 star reviews(assuming your like other authors and keep removing low ratings.)

Misspelled initiated as initiaded several times this chapter

"A Breton character pairs well with players looking to balance mage craft and combat. They are the most magically adept race in Skyrim, apart from the Altmer"

Lifespan is not an issue in a world where vampires and the cure for vampirism simultaneously exist. Just become a vampire at night or for the weekends and then cure yourself and youve effectively doubled or at least increased lifespan by 30%... which would be more than enough time for you to become a strong enough mage to enter the psijic order and become immortal.... and then you just have the become a leader or the leader of the psijic order to suddenly have dozens to hundreds of immortal mages to join your group carrying out the will of "robert"...

God already sd he was increasing magical talent of our mc... if i remember right there is a human race that specializes in magic.... if he just picked that, his starting talent in magic would probably be higher than any elven race and he wouldnt have to worry about the racists of skyrim... which is a large portion of the population...

What trash. So in the end your gonna fight an ntr system with an ntr system since netorare and netori are both ntr. Pathetic.

I think thats going a bit far....he didnt even know what he did was wrong.... this is like sending a 4 year old to jail for shooting someone.... or the victim shooting him back... its a bit much.....

Shame. You ruined it on the first chapter with the sentient system....

Honestly it should be a 3-3.5 star story as it adds too much MURICA into mha and turns naruto into a sasuke wanna-be.... and adds copius amounts of Christianity for no good reason besides maybe the author is an American Christian the worst holy book cherrypickers that the world has ever known. So i decided to give it ones in hopes it goes to at least a 3.9

Also he has sharingan but hasnt used a single dojutsu or genjutsu.... any genjutsy would make this battle a literal walk in the park for naruto, he could casually kill them when they get trapped in a genjutsu for a second....

Sorry but these last couple chapters have been incredibly distasteful. Finding sunshine? Your literally covering the entire naruto world in incredibly dark clouds right now.... your twisting and perverting all the characters we know and love... as tyrael said, "if your precious laws bind you all to inaction, then I will no longer stand as your brother!" I cannot sit in idleness as you corrupt and pervert a beloved world. Therefor i will be withdrawing this from my library and removing it from my history. May all who love kishimoto-sans work, do the same.

Wow, your being a bit ruthless and mean to all the side characters in naruto

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Also everyone whose not at least hokage level would be walking around with milimeterpeters is that was true

Theres a bit of a loophole here. Everyones penile size being tied to chakra capacity doesnt really make sense... because even after losing kurama naruto still has just as much chakra as any other hokage... theres no way A had significantly more then him even after losing kurama. And whrn he had kurama his capacity was probably dozens of times larger than A.....

Ram!~

I hope youll gaurentee he will only ntr his enemies. If he partakes in ntr against innocent guys I'll stop reading this like its yesterdays trash.