Tramicmel

Gg

I see the authors a big fan of dr facilier from the Disney movie "princess and the frog"? The second time ive seen the "wont you shake a poor sinners hand" meme referenced...

"There was a reason he dominated galactic conquest" this bit is part of a paragraph thats repeated twice in a row...

"The memories of last night* resurfaced" night, not might.

Keep it up, this is starting to garner alot of attention because of a YouTube video covering the first 45 chapters.

Sounds like a scam to me honestly.

The chapters arent consistent or often enough, guess this won't be a top story on here.

The ex-husband having moved on and gotten a new wife.... doesn't make sense if he comes crawling back trying to get together with his ex. Thought he was currently taking care of their son kaoru? Don't be a pathetic sadist that needs to see your girls ex living a sad single lifestyle to help you get off, that's pathetic.

Lol, this seems almost 🌽

I really like the premise. If you can keep up this rate of a chapter every day or every couple days, this would get a large respectable following around 80-120 chapters in. If you make it to 200+ chapters and they are all of this quality, it'll be a top story on here.