I highly recommend you start using Grammarly. It's free and helps with common writing issues, such as capitalization, quotations, missing words, punctuation, spelling, etc. I'd also recommend reading other people's novels to see how they write. It's always good to have references for inspiration or to piggyback on some ideas. 2/5.

I'm very impressed. The amount of thought and effort put into this is commendable. I hope other writers use this novel as a reference for their works, especially about characterization, relations, mentality, and politics. The author clearly understands the implications behind the Naruto universe and uses excellent critical thinking skills. Great work. 4.6/5.

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I highly enjoyed reading this novel. You don't see many fics that go into divination. I like the uniqueness of the character and background. I also liked the story and timeline, but I believe not many people will like it because it's distinct. This fanfic goes beyond what is typically normal on this website. What I don't like is the grammar. The first couple of chapters aren't that great to read, but the author has been improving themselves later on. It could use a bit of editing. I also wish the author had taken the time to write descriptions/environments in more detail. I'd rank this a 4.4/5.

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I enjoyed reading this! I wish LOTR was used more on this website. I love the story and your ideas so far. The biggest issue would be the writing and pacing, but it's already a higher quality than most on this website. Great work! 4.6/5.

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