shinigami78

yo Dany is actully cool

A nice fanfiction a nice start at least and the author seems motivated. Give some reviews and like to encourage him to continue. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

iam enjoying it so far. i dont feel it being to rushed definitely not a slow novel but its not that rushed at least for me its good.

EXODIA

Iam finding it hard to follow but so far its good.

that hurt...

Descriptions are top-notch making the readers immersed into the story while still allowing the readers imagination to be creative. Story development is good and the MC is smart and most importantly, new and unique ideas. Well done. Keep up the good work. [img=update] also i chose 1

a great job, over all a nice story a bit rushed, but i do rather you keep the current pace than to add fillars we are already sick of those. [img=recommend]