The story is interesting and draws one in, although the chapters are quite short, it is not to bad. The grammar can be sorted out but overall it is understandable. Good job.

Thank you very much, I'm happy that you like it so far, you have my gratitude. There are plenty more things added every chapter and it gets more interesting the further you read.[img=recommend]

That is the question, now isn't it... It's more for clearance sake, wrote it on a whim.

Thank you. Happy to know that you like it, much appreciated, do enjoy the next chapters as well. :D

Haha, Yep, he sure did. :D

Hey there, there's more about the scroll in further chapters, hope you enjoy it. :D

Thanks for letting me know, I'll add more detail in the early chapters. There's a lot more in later chapters so I hope you enjoy them[img=recommend]

Great book, It's something new for me, I'm not really used to these kinds of books, but definitely worth reading it. Good job![img=recommend]

remove 'hand' before 'right-hand' accidentally put and extra one.

The book is interesting, and there's a lot of potential, there are some grammar mistakes but that can always be ironed out with chapter editing. Other than that, it's pretty good not gonna lie. Good Job![img=recommend]

Each human had one type of element that they were proficient in, they could barely use any of the other elements.

3rd sentence. They only received elemental-based powers and nothing like the other species.

remove 'power' after combustion 2nd sentence

and the kingdom and council of this world formed 80 years of humans gained dominance

from 'fairies to griffins'

Dwarves 'were' instead of where

Happy to know you like it. Thank you for your thoughts, they are much appreciated.

Thank you :D much appreciated, glad you like it so far :D

The story starts in a good way, it pulls your interest somewhat instantaneously. The plot looks good. Some minor grammar mistakes but they can be ironed out without much trouble. Overall, Good job [img=recommend]

He might never "know" instead of now in last sentence