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He uses ChatGpt.

When does the monologue stop? I mean its been 14 pages of him talking to himself in the head and im tired of reading a conversation na mean?

1) uses themes and elememts from different books/videogames. Really disgusting how he is butchering their stories to be put in his. Lazy.Unimaginative.

1) Come up with your own ideas. Using a mashup of other animes and books to get your ideas... is frankly lazy and unimaginative. I quit at this page bc i cqnt continue to be horrified at the lazy continuance.

1st Dungeon... Explaining about classes.... He kills about 400 slimes...*ta dah!*lvl 155 with 6k stats. *Logic isnt computing*

Couldnt stand to read the 1st 4 chapters. get an imagination.

Hahahahaha Steve is an idiot. I would nrver mess around with someone who can control time albeit just a couple seconds. That is literally the difference of somone reaching into their pocket and lining a muzzle up to your head.

Ive skipped the past few chapters when they got arrested bc that was dumb. Seriously. A girl who wouldnt shut her mouth escalated a simple robbery into something a lot more and this guy wants to stick around with her?.. No thanks.

Not a lot can hear screaming/noises from under the ground. Seems to me to be a noise dampener whenever i used it.

Why didnt he simply sell the card for millions? He needs money. Not power. With his luck points he can simply buy new cards to open. I.. am flabbergasted.