TangoThree

Recreational Pocket Atlas (Budget Edition)

After a long hiatus, the author literally woke up and decided he would upload 20 chapters in less than a month. I still have to catch up 😅

the cover makes more sense now

To help me situate myself I made a doodle of what Libra looks like.

Finally caught up. One of the things I love about the story is how theres a huge potential for an antagonist being an academy reject that stood there with the other million of rejects in the gates

I love the story telling. However characters feel bland and generic, and the "Extra" is being revealed too soon. It honestly doesn't feel like he's an extra if the MC and their party start to realize how good he is. There's also obvious errors, and comprehension mistakes. Double read before publishing. If you want my advice, make this "Extra" feel like a unkown third party in the MC's journey. Keep it up, I can't wait to see what you come up with. Also, try to explore more of the world (cultures, countries, etc...)

love the twist but there was basically no build up. in the future if you want to make more twists like this consider this feedback 👍 btw Im really enjoying it

dont newborns open their eyes days after being born? its a detail i see a lot of isekai authors missing, even mainstream ones