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Brooooo, this novel! Its the most “educational” and “bizarre” thing on this site. After those free chaps, just expect some formulas for like: C 10H1 5N(Math plus an E) An overly detailed walkthrough on how the [Redacted] works and fun ways to make “volatile” goods. “C 7H5N 3O6(Tri Ni Trotoluene)+ Magic= Ultra massive boom” - the author probably. Friendly advice: do not show this to your local agent. Oh, it has massive melons. No idea why, but it seems people place great important on this matter.

A great book, among books Into the realms with infinite worlds A place to sit back and take a look, Into the world that will make you infinitely swirl, All in all, a world in a book, a book in a world.

This novel is simply exquisite. A splendor to the eyes The writing style is articulate, and the pacing is supernaturally fantabulous. I assure you, the plot of this novel is quite-- immaculate. Full of brilliance and intricacies. The world-building you experience here will create a utopia in your mind, and the main character shall teach you more than any sage in history can teach you. The system is quite competent, better than anything you would see in any novel you shall ever stumble upon. The grammar is on the level of a grandmaster in the English subject. The plot twists will form an all-encompassing twister in your cranium. And the steamy scenes😏, I leave that for you to find out.

The fighting scenes are spectacular and clear. It is so perfect that just reading this —once— will make you an expert in dark souls. The pacing is smooth and unique; the dialogues are something to look forward to as they show the character's emotions, goals, thoughts, and future. The planning, logistics, and world-building are extremely accurate alongside the ranks and lands. The writing style is easy to read while also being well put, and the descriptions give you a clear view of what is happening. The Romance is steady, not too fast, not too slow, just the right amount to have you at the edge of your seats. And that is all, why are you still reading this … and not the book itself?

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Am not sure on what your goal is for this novel but I hope you do continue