Angel_Garcia_6345

I love the story, but the grammar needs work

I think you can just rename the title and take the story in the direction you want it after a few chapters to flush out sum things it my opinion so don't worry about it

yurei si the gay in japanese

I read the first few chapters and I can't continue reading it because the writer can't decide if kurama is a girl or a boy with her in one chapter and him in another I just can't continue reading it

Dud l love your story keep it up man

it feels like I am reading a script for actors for there lines in a movie not a story

I like it but it doesn't feel like I am reading a story more like a script "power ":soen instead of "power " said soen so on and ext

ooo thanks Jbsus