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Kohan_086110dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1 I am Long Yi- Kohan_086114dReplied to Killer_ShiroCh 2 CHAPTER 1
- Kohan_086115dCommentedCh 5 Where is it?
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- Kohan_086126dCommentedCh 8 I'm awake
- Kohan_08612mthCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3
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Author, do you even know the lore of Bleach? - 10% of Aizen Sousuke's power is enough to kill Itachi Uchiha, and Obita Uchiha. So you can hardly keep reading an incompetent fanfic in which the author didn't even bother to look up the characterizations of characters from Bleach and Naruto. And don't try to justify that it's creative work. Since you published it, be prepared to be criticized. And the excuse that it's "the author's creative work" is cringe.
Kenya realized that he was not powerful enough to challenge the whole Konoha Village, especially not Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Obito, known as Uchiha Madara to some. - Kohan_08619mthCommented
Great Germany.
'Damn, I hadn't come up with a name yet. I need to quickly come up with something. Should I use something referring to my [Power of Annihilation]? Maybe I should, at least I need to come up with a temporary name to go by. Order of Nihility? That sounds like a cult and it's also kinda edgy. But I don't have a better alternative for now. I need to seriously sit down and talk it over with someone who has a better naming sense than me.' thought Kaiser. - Kohan_086111mthReplied to Pretending_Author
Don't you understand the dragons in the fantasy novels "A Song of Ice and Fire"?
Tyraxes - Kohan_086111mthReplied to
And what does he have to do with it? Sheepstealer is a dragon and not a wyvern.
Tyraxes - Kohan_086111mthCommented
The future Sith, will miss someone, even though I doubt that he will become a Sith. He's too kind or something.
Once clear, he ran as fast as his fourteen name day legs could carry him into the forest, the instinctive feeling telling Jon to head in this direction. To run quickly. The faster he moved, the sooner Jon would be free of the like of Lady Stark, the snooty Septa, the high and mighty Septon, Theon Greyjoy, and even Robb to some degree. He would miss Arya and Sansa despite the latter acting like her Mother at times. - Kohan_086111mthCommented
And by the way, if the main character cannot "correctly" use the dark side of the force, then he will look like a monster.
Jon Snow was crying. He was in a dark corner of Winterfell, his Father's castle, crying his eyes out. He didn't want anyone to see him like this. Robb and Theon would tease him without mercy. Though Robb was warming up to him slightly. Theon being a Greyjoy and acting more like a bastard himself at times seemed to impede the change to a certain degree. Sansa would be indifferent since her Mother would have taught the girl to ignore Jon's plight. Half-brother and bastard that he was in the family, Sansa took to her Mother's lessons like fish swim in the water. The only real friend he has was in little she-wolf Arya. Some said she was Lyanna Stark reborn since the girl didn't act like a lady at all despite Lady Stark's many attempts. - Kohan_086111mthCommented
I think the author does not know who the Sith are, and instead of a Sith, the main character will become a Jedi. And I will reveal the secret, the main character will not become a sith, he does not have a teacher who will direct him to use the dark side, and the main character, on the contrary, will be dependent on the dark side.
Jon Snow was crying. He was in a dark corner of Winterfell, his Father's castle, crying his eyes out. He didn't want anyone to see him like this. Robb and Theon would tease him without mercy. Though Robb was warming up to him slightly. Theon being a Greyjoy and acting more like a bastard himself at times seemed to impede the change to a certain degree. Sansa would be indifferent since her Mother would have taught the girl to ignore Jon's plight. Half-brother and bastard that he was in the family, Sansa took to her Mother's lessons like fish swim in the water. The only real friend he has was in little she-wolf Arya. Some said she was Lyanna Stark reborn since the girl didn't act like a lady at all despite Lady Stark's many attempts.