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A liberal offended by a common occurrence?

He ended up in her body, so the stats should match it accordingly.

Your writing reeks of youthful maximalism. It’s disappointing that there’s no realism in your story at all, especially considering that you yourself referred to realism in your previous comment.

It would be more realistic if the main character simply and straightforwardly eliminated potential enemies. That would be logical and rational. And by your own logic, she clearly wouldn’t manipulate people, so the claim that the main character used to be a businesswoman doesn’t really hold up.

I haven’t read it yet, but judging by the title and the fact that the author is a woman, it’s probably going to be some kind of left-liberal narrative. No dictatorship, no harshness, no killings, and the main heroine will be a typical soft, timid type. If I were in the main heroine’s place, I would’ve just killed the Avatar as soon as he awakened, because Zuko failed to do it.

I hoped it wouldn’t turn out to be a copy of other fanfics, but it ended up being exactly that. Unfortunately, I have to lower the rating to 2/5 because the main heroine is way too generic — a typical defender of good and justice, which looks outright terrible. Anyone would choose power over that, but in the end everything came off as fake.

Overall, I really liked the setting. A story where the main character here, the heroine turns into a demon (and I hope she actually will) is a pretty rare combination. The heroine’s intelligence is a bit frustrating, but I try not to focus on that. Everything else is done really well. I hope the upcoming chapters will be released as frequently as they are now.

Pretty good, but it’s unclear how the author decided to nerf Venom’s powers so he wouldn’t destroy this world. And “destroy” in what sense? Basically no one in this world can threaten Venom in terms of strength. So… I don’t know, I just hope the author doesn’t embarrass Venom.

I don’t understand why the person above gave a high rating, because the main character here is just a moron who can’t use Makima’s power properly. As a Makima fan, I find this fanfic really bad.

And who claimed the fanfic was bad? This fanfic is average, standard, nothing more. And why resort to personal attacks?