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worst hokage
You could make like 3 chapters with this. Most novels in this site have 1000 words a chapter
I like Whitebeards abilities. The Gura Gura no mi is pretty cool, espcially with the cracking affects
I bet the scroll has some sick as puppet
hmm. had they more teamwork, they could probably subjugate all the hidden villages at the same time
about time
killing intent could be substituted for Conquerors
Kumo looks pretty cool
I actually like it this way. Proper development instead of the instant OP characters
Like toph but with wind
So fire threads and earth threads? Earth could be like haki, which is cool
as expected of Aang's descendant
an octopus would be cool.
the Sannin of Suna
RED FLAG PEOPLE WE GOT A RED FLAG
dang, i expected him to be strong but S rank?