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Thank god someone said this. This chapter was so inconsistent with the actual characters that I couldn't even read it. I would still check further chapters but god I hope author would be consistent with the original character designs

The points you said are indeed facts but I want to shed some light on why he couldn't be do what the author said he should. First he was bullied by flash. Why he couldn't fight back? Maybe because flash is most popular sports star of school and he got connections while Peter is an orphan and comes from a household that barely makes their end meets. 2nd why he doesn't kill? Because he is kind? Maybe because he will be shot dead by police? Definitely. He ain't no Tony stark who could flip the bird to government. Why not use his intelligence to earn money? Cause that draws attention and that could potentially reveal his secret identity. Why that is a problem? Because he can not protect his loved ones from his enemies. Hope that helps

This Clark is much stronger than original superman because he kept training due to influence of Robert. He also worked hard and learnt from his stronger enemies which the original superman didn't bother. And although Odin is skyfather but how many attacks he could throw that are stronger than nuke? Even in canon superman can shrug off nuke

Great work

Uh why is sorcerer supreme a loli? And her name is Yao right. Mordo is the dude who became evil later.

Wow the twist and turns in the story are just WOW

Tftc it's really great work

Something was bugging me for the past few chapters and I just realised what... although it's pointless to say now but WHERE ARE THOSE BULLET PROOF JACKETS!? SHE HAS ONE ARMOUR CHEST UNOPENED,IF I REMEMBER RIGHT,AS WELL

Dude he didn't get existential crisis when he received a system which is definitely given by some cosmic power but he is shocked to find out that he is in the world he knew?

The author wrote some other Marvel fan fiction similar to this could you please tell me the name?