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The description of the book really caught my attention. I'm curious to see how the story will progress from reading. Looking forward to future updates. :)

The writing is good, but the pacing was pretty quick in the beginning. it would be nice to see it slow down a little so we can connect deeper with the mc and learn things gradually. :) I'm curious to see how the story continues.

The pacing is pretty fast paced, so it was a little hard to keep up in the beginning. I wish I was just a bit slower so we could connect with the character some more. I am curious to see where the story goes, though. :)

The beginning is a little slow; however, the voice is very strong in the writing. It definitely feels original and that's what draws me into the storyline and the main character!

You do a great job building up the plot at the start. It'd be great to see some more updates. The whole "demon lord candidate" aspect is intriguing, so I'm excited to see where it goes!

Dang. What's his sin? I feel like it'd be Greed.

Well, this took a dark turn.

Is tatsuya a boy or a girl? You use both pronouns with her and him.

You go, Natsumi.

Love the name Blackburn