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  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
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    The sage has it all. Impressive foreshadowing. Great outline. Perfect storyline. Loved it. Keep updating the novel more frequently, Ash. I look forward to it.

  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
    Posted

    Noiceee...Its a good read. The entire system at once concept is great. Keep updating soo I can keep reading. The world building is also perfectly planned and executed.

  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
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    This book has been deleted.
  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
    Commented

    Ohh yeah now thats a perfect waifu...!!!

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  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
    Replied to Daoist490051

    Yes its pretty great

  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
    Posted

    Its great just that the writing quality needs improvement. The character's thought are overflowing from his mouth. Its confusing to see whether the character is speaking or thinking.

  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
    Posted

    Its great, but the writing quality is a bit poor. The plot of the novel is actually confusing and nonexistent. Add the harem tag too. It has multiple females till date. Look into it. I hope u improve.

  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
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  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
    Commented

    Noice ly Written.

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  • semmuad
    semmuad2 years ago
    Posted

    Its a good read, just that you need a content editor. The text needs to be refined. But keep it up. I love system based novels. Write more and I'll support.

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