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Newbie_1591yrReplied to primal_vampireIam thinking [ PAUSE ] the Novel so I can continue it in the future. I will write another Novel with not to much complex ok . This novel has became to much Complex. ok . As I continued to put more things, but I can fill some gap . But iam not getting interes. So I will [ Pause ] . I will write a new Novel . That will be the 3rd Novel book . I hope to see you there . If there was time I will write few chapters and upload it .But not now!!
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 3 Tragic Event
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 12 Real life
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 18 Xenia feels jealous- “Then I and Shenshah will marry today itself!”
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 13 ##To answer all your questions so you can keep reading or drop this book!!
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 33 Forming A Plan...
- Newbie_1591yrCommented
Bruh man... The info dump and sometimes the mixture of povs of MC and other characters with the thought makes the story confusing.. sometimes I don't even know which character is speaking or not ... Needs some rewrite..
Ch 12 I can't read, but I buy newspapers and pretend to read them on the train. I do. Because it's cool. - Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 7 Prologue (End): What is the strongest existence? The answer is "C."
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 4 Prologue Part 4: Flying Reincarnation and What to Do in This World
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 3 Prologue Part 3: Information Session? No, it's a Round of Explanations
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 5 Unexpected Growth [1]
- Newbie_1591yrReplied to Newbie_159Ch 55 Childish Demi-God
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 54 A single drop of tear is enough
- Newbie_1591yrCommentedCh 20 Capital Elsiyara