Sir_Killington

I really appreciate the review! Yeah, sorry about the paywall. If it means anything, I didn't lock the chapters for money. I hoped that by locking the chapters, the book would get more exposure/increase the reading base (because it'd be making a profit). Thanks for reading!

I can neither confirm nor deny anything. xD

That's very relieving to hear! There's a lot planned for him, so it would've been a waste to kill him here. xD

Though some paragraphs could be broken up, the writing itself is digestible and not unnecessarily convoluted. The dialogue (which always the easiest to mess up) is fantastically crafted and clearly supports the defined personalities of each character. The author does a great job describing atmosphere. I FELT it during some of the situations Uriel got caught up in in the classroom.

xD. It'll happen

I'm glad to hear that! Thanks!

While this type of novel isn't really my cup of tea, it's important to note that's not for lack of well-crafted dialogue, bad flow, or anything along those lines. The story is very nicely crafted with an easily digestible writing style and nice imagery. Very nicely done. :)

Definitely a novel that's above "above average" lmao. The descriptions are in depth and enhanced by a wide variety of vocabulary. So far (as of chapter 4) I can't detect any "choppy" dialogue or long-winded info dumps that would detract from the story. Very well done!

The folly of the rich. It's when you're too safe that you're at your most vulnerable.

H-How you do this?! I want to do fancy stuff in my book too!