Healdor

Next time, I want to write a new book in a more structured and planned way, rather than relying on inspiration as I go.

Thank you for your comment. Unfortunately, I don’t speak English, so I relied on translation tools, which resulted in poor writing quality. I eventually stopped working on the novel I had been writing on a whim, partly because I realized I had created an overwhelmingly vast universe toward the later chapters, but mainly because of the difficulties with translation.

Thank you for your comment. Unfortunately, I don't know English and I was using Google Translate for my translations, which led to very poor writing quality. I stopped writing the novel, which I wrote with spontaneous inspiration, because I realized I had written about an overwhelmingly vast universe in the final chapters, but the main reason was the difficulty of translation.

English is not my native language, I leave it to artificial intelligence to edit and improve as much as I can, there may be problems.

I plan to draw a character with a mindset similar to Fang yuan, who is unyielding and thinks that everything is permissible on the way to power, on the other hand, it will not be as bad as him, of course, so I chose 2 of them.

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I actually made some of these abilities sometimes inactive and I would like to tell you why but that would be a spoiler and you can say that this ability of the mc is a skill designed for martial arts, it is not 100% activated in firearms like rifles but on the other hand you are right there I just wanted to say hey look this is how the character's ability works

I believe that things like the harem give the character a distinct weak point I want to write a reckless fearless character but it can be considered in the future

you should read more

If you have found a logic error, please tell me, I made a few corrections about this ability in the next chapters, so that there is no logic error.